Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people say that what children watch on TV influences their behaviour while others say the amount of time children they spend watching TV influences their behavior. Discuss both views and give your opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi IELTS ngày 14/12/2022)
I. Đề bài
Some people say that what children watch on TV influences their behaviour while others say the amount of time children they spend watching Tv influences their behavior. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
- Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
- Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
- Body 1: Viết về quan điểm others say the amount of time children they spend watching Tv influences their behavior
- Main idea 1: The longer children are exposed to Tv programs, the more likely it is for them to become addicted to watching television. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: the more children watch TV, the more significant the effect is on their personality and behaviours)
- Supporting idea:
- As a proverb says “Rome was not built in a day”, the influence of TV on children is a gradual and continuous process >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "INFLUENCE" tiếng anh
- When children become over-reliant on television for entertainment, they might neglect engagement in outdoor activities.
- This may result in a sedentary lifestyle that is highly detrimental to their physical health. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Children suffer from a severe lack of outdoor activity and exercise, which are vital for a child’s well-being and development)
- Example: My niece Sarah, an energetic 8-year-old, used to enjoy playing outside with her friends, but her parents noticed a change as she increasingly spent more time watching television, leading to a decline in her energy levels, weight gain, and a shift away from outdoor activities, highlighting the gradual negative impact of excessive screen time on children's well-being.
- Supporting idea:
- Main idea 2: Children would feel discouraged from having real interactions with people around them if they spent a huge amount of time in front of the screen.
- Supporting idea:
- This may hinder their development of social skills due to their reduction in interaction with family members and the outside world. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "reduction"
- This causes their unconfidence or even the risk of autism.
- Example: Scientific research suggests that high screen time can impede social skill development in children, as evidenced by a 2007 study in Pediatrics which found that children who watched two or more hours of television daily in their early years displayed poorer social skills, likely due to limited real-life social interactions and potential misinterpretation of social cues portrayed differently on TV.
- Supporting idea:
- Main idea 1: The longer children are exposed to Tv programs, the more likely it is for them to become addicted to watching television. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: the more children watch TV, the more significant the effect is on their personality and behaviours)
- Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Some people say that what children watch on TV influences their behaviour & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này
- Main idea: The majority of Tv shows present glamorised depictions of inappropriate materials such as violence, drug abuse or casual sex. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "material" tiếng anh
- Supporting idea: Youngsters may adopt unhealthy habits and improper behaviours.
- Example: For example, they might fall under the impression that the use of alcoholic drinks is fashionable without being aware of the health risks they carry and later end up consuming these substances.
- Main idea: The majority of Tv shows present glamorised depictions of inappropriate materials such as violence, drug abuse or casual sex. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "material" tiếng anh
- Body 1: Viết về quan điểm others say the amount of time children they spend watching Tv influences their behavior
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