Giải đề"Some people say that the increasing business and cultural contact between countries has positive effects. Others say it would lead to the loss of national identities. Discuss and give your opinion"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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Some people say that the increasing business and cultural contact between countries has positive effects. Others say it would lead to the loss of national identities. Discuss and give your opinion.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• increasing = growing = ever-increasing = further = developing
• business = trade = commerce. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "trade" tiếng anh
• cultural contact = cultural exchange = cross-culture
• between countries = international = worldwide = global = transnational = borderless
• lose = disappear = be assimilated = be overwhelmed
• national identities = national specialities = cultural quintessence
• Inflow of foreign capital only for export purposes: dòng tiền ngoại tệ chỉ cho mục đích xuất khẩu
• Neglect of production in the domestic sector: sự bỏ bê sản xuất trong nước
• Eagerness of adapting to the culture: sự háo hức thích nghi với nền văn hoá
• Cross-culture activities: các hoạt động đa văn hoá. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Từ vựng topic Multicultural societies IELTS
• Intellectual property: sở hữu trí tuệ

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• BODY 1: Viết về view 2”Others say it would lead to the loss of national identities”
  • Main idea 1: (Viết về the increasing business) Borderless commerce underlines the necessity of an international language, leading to the disappearance of minor dialects on a global scale. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách paraphrase từ "need" tiếng anh
    • Supporting idea: The world has become a global village in which people from distinct regions speak the same language
    • Example: The exponential growth of e-commerce, exemplified by online marketplaces like Amazon and Alibaba, underscores the importance of a common language, with English emerging as the lingua franca due to its historical and current dominance in international trade, leading many businesses to conduct transactions and marketing in English to reach a wider audience, even when operating solely within their own countries.
       
  • Main idea 2: (Viết về cultural contact) The dominance of affluent countries’ cultures speeds up the disappearance of others’ cultural specialities (HOẶC: Cultural exchanges can lead to the possibility of losing traditions and customs in local communities)
    • Supporting idea: A large number of individuals in these communities adapt quickly to foreign cultures in the attempts to conform to ideals not of their own, which can have devastating effects. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "devastate" tiếng anh
    • Example: Vietnamese young generation prefer American and Korean songs, films and TV shows rather than their traditional folksongs, dances and dramatics thanks to the process of integration >> Occident costumes, foods and lifestyles have gradually penetrated into Vietnamese people’s daily life, taking the place of time-honored values.
• BODY 2: Viết về view 1”Some people say that the increasing business and cultural contact between countries has positive effects” —> nêu mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
  • Main idea 1: (Viết về the increasing business) The international trade and business opportunities have helped global citizens to purchase and sell products at a competitive price, which allows them to have far more options nowadays than in the past. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng "nowadays" tiếng anh
    • Supporting idea:
      • When businesses operate on a global scale, they are exposed to competition from various regions. 
      • This competition drives innovation, efficiency, and cost-effectiveness as companies strive to differentiate themselves and attract customers. 
      • As a result, consumers benefit from a wider array of products and services at competitive prices.
  • Main idea 2: (Viết về cultural contact) In the area of flourishing international tourism, a country is given the ability to promote its images in others’ eyes. 
    • Supporting idea: 
      • Globalization, the tendency in which countries are growingly reciprocal, is a precious and unprecedented opportunity for an inferior culture to be advertised to the outside world. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Word form của "inferior"
      • Cultural quintessence including cuisine, costume and festivals can be preserved and brought into play
    • Example: For instance, the growing popularity of South Korean food, driven in part by the Korean Wave (Hallyu), has sparked interest in Korean culture as a whole. Tourists visiting Korea are eager to experience kimchi, bibimbap, and other traditional dishes, gaining a deeper appreciation for Korean culinary traditions.

HOẶC có thể tham khảo ý khác:

• Borrowing from other cultures can be a positive exchange, as it is conducive to gain a mutual respect and understanding for new cultures. Providing that international students have opportunities to learn about other cultures, they are more likely to not only build personal relationships, but also learn about these cultures from a local perspective, from which they can greatly benefit. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ"perspective"tiếng anh

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