Giải đề"Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?" IELTS WRITING (Đề thi 14/9/2023 - kèm bài sửa HS IELTS TUTOR)

Bên cạnh Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi), IELTS TUTOR Giải đề"Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?" IELTS WRITING

Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Lưu ý đối với dạng bài có từ MUST là từ chỉ tuyệt đối hoá cần đọc kĩ và thường sẽ theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE vì must mang tính bắt buộc và tuyệt đối hoá, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE với quan điểm đề cho có thể bố cục như sau:
• Body 1: nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE với quan điểm “Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead”
  • Main idea 1: Các công trình kiến trúc thu hút du lịch từ đó làm tăng ngân sách quốc gia  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt: Museums that house ancient artefacts could host special exhibitions to attract a significant number of tourists, and subsequently generate a sizable income)
    • Supporting idea 1: các công trình kiến trúc là nơi thu hút du lịch vì chứa đựng giá trị tinh thần  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt: Art has greatly contributed to our cultural growth, which betters the understanding of our heritage and fills the gap between different generations)
    • Example 1: The Cave of Altamira serves as a UNESCO World Heritage Site, showcasing prehistoric cave paintings and engravings dating back between 11,000 and 51,000 years, offering invaluable insights into the lives and beliefs of our ancient ancestors while bridging generations through the enduring power of art.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)

• Body 2: nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE với quan điểm đề cho 
  • Main idea 2: Art nói chung giúp con người giải toả stress  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt Quality of life could be vastly enhanced through the performing arts such as music and theatre due to their entertainment value)
    • Supporting idea 2: 
      • They are incredible outlets for people to release stress by allowing them to escape the harsh realities of life. >> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
      • Consequently, our emotional and mental health would be fully nourished, which could be just as crucial as looking after our physical well-being.
    • Example 2: A study by the National Endowment for the Arts found that young people who participate in the arts are more likely to graduate from high school and to go on to college. They are also more likely to be employed and to have higher incomes.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

In this day and age, the question of whether governments should allocate funds to the arts or solely to public services remains a contentious issue. From my perspective, I totally disagree with the assertion that funding the arts is a waste of money, as the arts contribute significantly to cultural preservation and individual well-being.

Firstly, arts and cultural investments, such as funding for museums and theatres, are far from wasteful as they generate substantial economic and social benefits. Architectural landmarks like museums or galleries housing ancient artefacts often serve as major tourist attractions, thereby boosting national revenue. For instance, UNESCO World Heritage Sites such as the Cave of Altamira preserve prehistoric cave paintings that not only provide invaluable insights into ancient civilizations but also strengthen the connection between generations. Furthermore, heritage preservation plays a pivotal role in fostering national identity, enriching people's understanding of their roots, and creating a shared sense of belonging.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

Secondly, the performing arts—music, theatre, and similar forms of artistic expression—play a paramount role in improving people’s emotional and mental well-being. Such creative outlets allow individuals to escape the mundane realities of daily life and alleviate stress. This, in turn, nourishes their mental health, which is just as vital as maintaining physical health. For instance, a study by the National Endowment for the Arts revealed that participation in artistic activities enhances students' likelihood of graduating and attaining higher incomes. This demonstrates that the arts not only provide entertainment but also nurture essential skills and opportunities for personal growth.

In conclusion, while public services are undoubtedly crucial, investment in the arts is equally important, as it fosters cultural development, enhances economic gains, and supports mental well-being.

New Vocabulary and Explanations

1. Contentious (gây tranh cãi): Used to describe a topic that sparks disagreement or debate.
   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: This is a contentious issue in modern politics.
2. Architectural landmarks (công trình kiến trúc nổi bật): Iconic buildings or sites that hold cultural or historical significance.
   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: The Eiffel Tower is one of the most famous architectural landmarks in the world.
3. UNESCO World Heritage Sites (Di sản thế giới UNESCO): Sites recognized for their cultural, historical, or natural importance.
   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Ha Long Bay is a UNESCO World Heritage Site.
4. Heritage preservation (bảo tồn di sản): The act of safeguarding cultural or historical artefacts for future generations.
   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Heritage preservation helps maintain a nation's identity.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
5. Fostering national identity (thúc đẩy bản sắc dân tộc): Encouraging pride and unity within a nation's culture and history.
   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Traditional festivals are a way of fostering national identity.
6. Shared sense of belonging (cảm giác thuộc về chung): A collective feeling of connection within a group or society.
   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Community activities create a shared sense of belonging.
7. Paramount role (vai trò tối quan trọng): Extremely important or essential role.
   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Education plays a paramount role in shaping the future of a nation.
8. Mundane realities (thực tế nhàm chán): The dull or routine aspects of everyday life.
   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Arts provide an escape from mundane realities.
9. Nourishes (nuôi dưỡng): Enhances or supports growth, especially emotionally or mentally.
   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Good music nourishes the soul.
10. Personal growth (sự phát triển cá nhân): The process of improving skills, knowledge, or emotional health.

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Volunteering contributes significantly to personal growth

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