Phân tích"It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environments, such as the South Pole. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environments, such as the South Pole. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environments, such as the South Pole. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng outweigh thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng outweigh có 2 cách làm tuỳ theo target mình hướng đến:
  • Cách 1: Theo hướng Totally (advantages>disadvantages)
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao advantages>disadvantages (Viết về scientists) 
      • Main idea: when visiting remote areas, people, especially scientists, might acquire more knowledge about the natural habitat >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "habitat" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Remote areas often have ecosystems that are less impacted by human activity. 
        • This means scientists can observe natural processes and interactions without as much interference, providing a clearer picture of how these systems function.
      • Example: For example, when coming to the North Pole, scientists can learn about the life of polar bears which live far away from humans >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng HUMAN và HUMANS tiếng anh
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao advantages>disadvantages (Viết về tourists)
      • Main idea: this is a newer and more interesting type of travelling.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Since going to other cities or countries has been too common for most people, it might be more exciting for them to explore new places such as the South Pole or the Amazon rainforest. 
        • This gives them valuable experiences and unforgettable memories.
  • Cách 2: Theo hướng Partly (partly - CHỈ RIÊNG với dạng OUTWEIGH này thì nếu target 7.0 có thể viết còn các dạng khác không nên viết partly nhé) 
    • Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures) >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "consequence" tiếng anh 
    • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
      • Main idea 1: when visiting remote areas, people, especially scientists, might acquire more knowledge about the natural habitat.
        • Supporting idea:
          • Remote areas often have ecosystems that are less impacted by human activity. 
          • This means scientists can observe natural processes and interactions without as much interference, providing a clearer picture of how these systems function.
        • Example: For example, when coming to the North Pole, scientists can learn about the life of polar bears which live far away from humans.
      • Main idea 2: this is a newer and more interesting type of travelling
        • Supporting idea:
          • Since going to other cities or countries has been too common for most people, it might be more exciting for them to explore new places such as the South Pole or the Amazon rainforest. 
          • This gives them valuable experiences and unforgettable memories.
    • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
      • Main idea 1:  travelling to remote natural areas can be risky if the travellers are not sufficiently prepared >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Word form của "Risk"
        • Supporting idea:
          • Remote areas often lack the infrastructure and amenities readily available in urban or populated areas. 
          • Access to medical facilities, emergency services, food, water, and shelter may be limited or nonexistent. 
          • Without proper preparation, travelers may find themselves stranded without essential resources.
        • Example:  
          • For instance, the temperature at the South Pole is usually very low, which adversely affects people’s health. 
          • Travelling to forests can also be dangerous as people have to face the risk of being attacked by animals >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Từ vựng TOPIC "ANIMAL" IELTS 
      • Main idea 2: Since visiting isolated places often requires a large amount of investment in researching and ensuring the safety of travellers, the costs of travelling tend to be high.
        • Supporting idea: 
          • Isolated places typically lack well-developed infrastructure such as roads, hotels, and other amenities commonly found in more accessible areas. 
          • As a result, establishing necessary facilities for travelers can be expensive.

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