Giải đề"In some countries, university students live at home, while in other countries university students go to other cities rather than live with their family. Do you think the benefits of living away from home outweigh the disadvantages?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5) - Đề thi 27/1/2024

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"In some countries, university students live at home, while in other countries university students go to other cities rather than live with their family. Do you think the benefits of living away from home outweigh the disadvantages?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

In some countries, university students live at home, while in other countries university students go to other cities rather than live with their family. Do you think the benefits of living away from home outweigh the disadvantages?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng outweigh thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng outweigh có 2 cách làm tuỳ theo target mình hướng đến:
  • Cách 1: Theo hướng Totally (advantages > disadvantages)
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao advantages > disadvantages
      • Main idea: One obvious positive aspect is fostering independence in terms of running a household and providing oneself with some basic necessities such as laundry and cooking meals.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Từ vựng topic "colleague" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: Not only are these skills an essential stage in the maturing process, but they are also the key to success in surviving in modern concrete jungles. 
      • Example: In my own experience, moving away for college necessitated learning to independently manage household tasks such as laundry and cooking, proving to be a challenging yet significant step in my maturing process and preparing me for the demands of living in a bustling city where self-sufficiency is essential for success.
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao advantages > disadvantages
      • Main idea: Students are able to escape the distractions of family life, and thereby establish study routines and form friendships with other students who find themselves in the same situation.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng dấu câu trong IELTS
      • Supporting idea: These factors may help them in their studies.
  • Cách 2: Theo hướng Partly (partly - CHỈ RIÊNG với dạng OUTWEIGH này thì nếu target 7.0 có thể viết còn các dạng khác không nên viết partly nhé) 
    • Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures)
    • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
      • Main idea 1: Students are able to escape the distractions of family life, and thereby establish study routines and form friendships with other students who find themselves in the same situation.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng từ "parent" tiếng anh
        • Supporting idea: These factors may help them in their studies.
      • Main idea 2: One obvious positive aspect is fostering independence in terms of running a household and providing oneself with some basic necessities such as laundry and cooking meals. 
        • Supporting idea: Not only are these skills an essential stage in the maturing process, but they are also the key to success in surviving in modern concrete jungles.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "essential" tiếng anh
        • Example: In my own experience, moving away for college necessitated learning to independently manage household tasks such as laundry and cooking, proving to be a challenging yet significant step in my maturing process and preparing me for the demands of living in a bustling city where self-sufficiency is essential for success.
    • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
      • Main idea 1: One disadvantage is having to find accommodation  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Students from other provinces have to stay in dormitory accommodation or rent a room off campus in order to complete their study)
        • Supporting idea: Universities are often located in major urban centres, where rents are high if students have to find a room with even the basic facilities.
        • Example: A student from a rural province accepted into a prestigious university in a bustling city must seek accommodation in a dormitory or off-campus, yet the high cost of housing in the prime urban location poses a significant financial challenge.
      • Main idea 2: such early entering into adulthood is sometimes believed to be stressful, therefore, requiring gradual adaptation. 
        • Supporting idea: 
          • Mature as freshmen may seem, they still have strong bonding with their parents, which makes them homesick and emotionally unstable  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "role" tiếng anh
          • Being unexperienced in real life, young people might be vulnerable to issues they are likely to encounter in a new place, for instance, fraud or other criminal activities.
  • IELTS TUTOR gợi ý các ideas khác:
    • Another undeniable merit of studying away is developing out-of-the box thinking due to being exposed to numerous everyday challenges, for example, filling documents or communicating with the landlord. Thus, if it were not for this experience, youngsters would be strictly limited to the older generation’s values and convictions, which are irrevocably tied to rigidity and narrow-mindedness.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Mạo từ THE trong tiếng anh

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